Kemp! And others...
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Been writing since School (what 9 years)
Haven't done any for a year or so but I should get back to them
Dunno when I find writing best really: quiet contemplative moments I spose. I wrote more at Uni as I had the time and inclination
I find that I can't force myself to write one, they just come when I feel like it
Haven't done any for a year or so but I should get back to them
Dunno when I find writing best really: quiet contemplative moments I spose. I wrote more at Uni as I had the time and inclination
I find that I can't force myself to write one, they just come when I feel like it
With peeves on the "not disecting a poem to pieces" but I do like poems if they move you or get you thinking , imagining etc, kemps yours done just that.
I have read some really moving poems in my time, all from unknowns, and one day perhaps I will have time to write my own.
I think that you only write when you feel like it is the best way as it is inspired and not forced.
Good luck with your work.
I have read some really moving poems in my time, all from unknowns, and one day perhaps I will have time to write my own.
I think that you only write when you feel like it is the best way as it is inspired and not forced.
Good luck with your work.
nice matt, but very very similar to the CCTV one i read by you a while back
the same sarcastic persona, and witty finishing line. I'm not sure if it can be considered a writing style or not, it makes me think, which is always good for poetry
most interesting line for me: "art motionless burned in stone", interesting choice by using "burned", it completely changes the mood, and the imagery is obvious. Mind if i ask why you chose that word (if you can remember?)
any more you have would be cool
the same sarcastic persona, and witty finishing line. I'm not sure if it can be considered a writing style or not, it makes me think, which is always good for poetry
most interesting line for me: "art motionless burned in stone", interesting choice by using "burned", it completely changes the mood, and the imagery is obvious. Mind if i ask why you chose that word (if you can remember?)
any more you have would be cool
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Aye tis similar cause I wrote it 
burned has a certain finality about it, plus theres the biblical reference and then fire and brimstone like it's been "burned in by the gods" so ye gives it a difinitive meaning, rather than written which suggests less finaltity and more flexibility
burned has a certain finality about it, plus theres the biblical reference and then fire and brimstone like it's been "burned in by the gods" so ye gives it a difinitive meaning, rather than written which suggests less finaltity and more flexibility
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Don't study too hard: that's my advice. When I was 16 before my final GCSE English I was getting hammered on the Dance-Floor of my loca Ikon which was the busiest club in the country that week, and I got on MTV dance-floor (on the podium with 5 mates)
My teacher was unimpressed, but I got an A
Basically with English essays blag as much as possible and you'll be fine
My teacher was unimpressed, but I got an A
Basically with English essays blag as much as possible and you'll be fine
name='Kempez™' said:Don't study too hard: that's my advice. When I was 16 before my final GCSE English I was getting hammered on the Dance-Floor of my loca Ikon which was the busiest club in the country that week, and I got on MTV dance-floor (on the podium with 5 mates)
My teacher was unimpressed, but I got an A
Basically with English essays blag as much as possible and you'll be fine
Lol wait, you were on MTV?
Also, English isn't what's wrroying me. English is a fly by for me tbh so easy lol. The thing I'm worried bout is math
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Ye I sucked at maths, only got a damn B 
Ah well all I can say is that at least I didn't waste time revising for their either
Ah well all I can say is that at least I didn't waste time revising for their either
name='Kempez™' said:Ye I sucked at maths, only got a damn B
Ah well all I can say is that at least I didn't waste time revising for their either
Dude OMG! I'm jsut like that the only thing holdin me back from a 4.0 is firkkkkkkkkkkkkkkin math >=(
B= not acceptable like WTF. Last time I got an A in math was like last year 1 quarter.
GHEY.
*suicide*
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lol You'll be ok man
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I'm resigned to getting a B in math this semester... All because of bloody stupid mistakes...
maths is such a superior subject to english tbh
maths has a right/wrong answer, english is very much the opposite.
granted some people find maths hard, but at GCSE (or whatever the US equivelant) its so pathetic its untrue. At your level, you can revise for everything and learn it, when you get to A level, you do need a genuine understanding.
in other news, yay exams are over
maths has a right/wrong answer, english is very much the opposite.
granted some people find maths hard, but at GCSE (or whatever the US equivelant) its so pathetic its untrue. At your level, you can revise for everything and learn it, when you get to A level, you do need a genuine understanding.
in other news, yay exams are over
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Maths sucks. English I can get, even up to high-level stuff where you need to know how to deconstruct sentences and do logic and stuff. Maths I h8
