Kemp! And others...

[PV5150]

Originally Posted by name='Kempez™'

I agree Peevs. One for you then maybe:

Frozen Art

You will see what I want you to see

constricted through my feeling of authorship

the images supplied supposedly left open for interpretation

Restricted to set parameters

Art motionless burned in stone

To be read 40 days later

‘Thou wilt not use your imagination’

(Copyright Matthew Kemp)

Now that is cool mate. How long have you been writing? You have a very mature writing style. I really must ask...when do you find yourself writing the best, and is your writing all spontaneous?

[FarFarAway]

Been writing since School (what 9 years)

Haven't done any for a year or so but I should get back to them

Dunno when I find writing best really: quiet contemplative moments I spose. I wrote more at Uni as I had the time and inclination

I find that I can't force myself to write one, they just come when I feel like it

[mVp24]

Originally Posted by name='Kempez™'

Been writing since School (what 9 years)

Haven't done any for a year or so but I should get back to them

Dunno when I find writing best really: quiet contemplative moments I spose. I wrote more at Uni as I had the time and inclination

I find that I can't force myself to write one, they just come when I feel like it

Very nice Kemp!

[chudley]

With peeves on the "not disecting a poem to pieces" but I do like poems if they move you or get you thinking , imagining etc, kemps yours done just that.

I have read some really moving poems in my time, all from unknowns, and one day perhaps I will have time to write my own.

I think that you only write when you feel like it is the best way as it is inspired and not forced.

Good luck with your work.

[Dav0s]

nice matt, but very very similar to the CCTV one i read by you a while back

the same sarcastic persona, and witty finishing line. I'm not sure if it can be considered a writing style or not, it makes me think, which is always good for poetry

most interesting line for me: "art motionless burned in stone", interesting choice by using "burned", it completely changes the mood, and the imagery is obvious. Mind if i ask why you chose that word (if you can remember?)

any more you have would be cool

[FarFarAway]

Aye tis similar cause I wrote it

burned has a certain finality about it, plus theres the biblical reference and then fire and brimstone like it's been "burned in by the gods" so ye gives it a difinitive meaning, rather than written which suggests less finaltity and more flexibility

[mVp24]

Ok guys, thanks for your help! My final is tomorrow morning, so any last minute inputs would be awesome. Gonna go study some more.

:sleep: :sleep: :sleep: :sleep:

[FarFarAway]

Don't study too hard: that's my advice. When I was 16 before my final GCSE English I was getting hammered on the Dance-Floor of my loca Ikon which was the busiest club in the country that week, and I got on MTV dance-floor (on the podium with 5 mates)

My teacher was unimpressed, but I got an A

Basically with English essays blag as much as possible and you'll be fine

[mVp24]

Originally Posted by name='Kempez™'

Don't study too hard: that's my advice. When I was 16 before my final GCSE English I was getting hammered on the Dance-Floor of my loca Ikon which was the busiest club in the country that week, and I got on MTV dance-floor (on the podium with 5 mates)

My teacher was unimpressed, but I got an A

Basically with English essays blag as much as possible and you'll be fine

Lol wait, you were on MTV?

Also, English isn't what's wrroying me. English is a fly by for me tbh so easy lol. The thing I'm worried bout is math .

[FarFarAway]

Ye I sucked at maths, only got a damn B

Ah well all I can say is that at least I didn't waste time revising for their either